“Night Adventure”, a water colour by my sister, Julia MacLaurin, 1993, privately owned

Now “till” is with a small ‘t’ and doesn’t sit on the figure riding the fish:From Moonrise Forside 2 300 new

I still think the “till” is too close to the figure riding the fish, but perhaps we’ll stop here for now as Julia wants a picture taken of her water colour when it’s not behind glass.

One photo later and one day later this is how it looks:

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