Sky, sea, seagulls, shore,
sea rocket, grass – a furlong
from our new front door.
Saeby Haiku Diary 6
13 Sunday Jul 2014
Posted in Haiku
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13 Sunday Jul 2014
Posted in Haiku
Sky, sea, seagulls, shore,
sea rocket, grass – a furlong
from our new front door.
The second line was originally: “sea kale, grass – all a short walk”.
I’ve replaced “a stone’s throw” with “a wee walk”. And in line 3 I’ve changed “my” to “our”.