Saeby Haiku Diary 6 13 Sunday Jul 2014 Posted by duncangmaclaurin in Haiku ≈ 2 Comments Sky, sea, seagulls, shore, sea rocket, grass – a furlong from our new front door. Share this:TwitterMoreFacebookEmailPrintLike this:Like Loading... Related
The second line was originally: “sea kale, grass – all a short walk”.
I’ve replaced “a stone’s throw” with “a wee walk”. And in line 3 I’ve changed “my” to “our”.